Terrence Posted August 10, 2005 Share Posted August 10, 2005 Here's another, let me know what you think people... Why me? Why me? Why am I so wrong for love? Why is my faith and trust abused? I guess i know where I stand now In the same place I've always stood But being here, I always hoped for more Thinking of our times You know you spurred me on You spurred me on Made me who I want to be You showed a glimpse of me You made me see that You made me see who I am The person i am and am still So why me? Why did you touch me only to let me go? Why did you kiss me only to make me cry? Why me? What did i do to feel alone? Alone and without you I loved you and still do Is that wrong? So wrong that I still care and always will Is that wrong? If it is Then why am I so wrong So wrong for love Why me? Written 20th August 2003 Terrence Link to comment
AlwaysNeedHelp Posted August 10, 2005 Share Posted August 10, 2005 So why me? Why did you touch me only to let me go? Why did you kiss me only to make me cry? Why me? i like this part ...... Link to comment
ShySoul Posted August 11, 2005 Share Posted August 11, 2005 Maybe its not you thats wrong for love. Maybe its her thats wrong for you? "I loved you and still do Is that wrong? So wrong that I still care and always will Is that wrong? " I know the feeling.... Link to comment
Terrence Posted August 11, 2005 Author Share Posted August 11, 2005 Well this poem is one from 2 yrs ago, it turns out that she was wrong for me anyway, so you're right shy soul. however this poem probably caters for the whole of my life as to why I'm so unlucky in love, and as for the other poem london girl, well i think the one that this poem was for was wrong for me also. Link to comment
zita Posted August 14, 2005 Share Posted August 14, 2005 This is so emotionally honest that it is hard not to take it in. Makes me cry at first time reading it. love it!!! Link to comment
ForAnother Posted August 14, 2005 Share Posted August 14, 2005 Nice and simple. Common thoughts. I thought you were going to say something about your life and wrong loves... but it was sweet about this one girl. i'd like to see you write one that kind of describes why since Boyhood you were wrong for love. I think some good stuff could come of it. Keep it simple like this one though ForAnother Link to comment
good_kisser_gal Posted August 17, 2005 Share Posted August 17, 2005 very nice poem!! i loved it... actually i also wrote a poem with the same thought as yours...i entitled it wrong with me?" its true that no matter how weve been good to someone, still we only got nothing but pain and heartaches..."sniff..sniff" and only left in puzzled and never understand why.... keep writing nice poems of love.... Link to comment
Terrence Posted August 19, 2005 Author Share Posted August 19, 2005 Thanks everyone for your replies, this is one of my fave poems, very true to me and reminds me of an old flame... Terrence Link to comment
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