Just because I had to...

[MR]

Just wrote this for that certain someone. It didn't really help but maybe someone can take something from it. Let me know what you think, thanks for reading.

 

 

For You

 

I have no options left,

I have no life within me,

My love for you isn't enough,

Our life together you can't see.

 

I hope you know how much I care,

And what I'd do to have you back,

Sometimes people are fools,

I've certainly been guilty of that.

 

The day you went my world faded away.

The darkness is all i have now

The torment knowing I was wrong,

Each day is one more step into hell.

 

If time would just go back,

I'd change the world for you,

But such power we can't have,

So I'm left crying without you.

 

I miss your smile

I miss you what you made me see

I miss your laugh, but most of all

I miss what you made me.

 

I can't write much more,

The tears still cloud my eyes,

But know one thing my perfect angel

I'm sorry and without you I'll die.

 

Forgiveness may be a step to far

I pushed you to the edge and beyond

But life I can't change,

If only this man could cure his wrongs.

 

So goodbye my perfect girl

Keep you head up and god bless

Without me your life will move on,

And i want nothing for you but happiness.

[dude123]

This poem is great. All I could say is that you have a gift for writing poems.

[cs20thcenturyfox]

Hello MR

 

That is a very nice poem, the girl that made you write, she'll regret losing someone like you . Good luck 8) .

[MR]

Thanks! Just a quick five minute one really.

I think she won't really miss me though to be honest.

Anyway thanks for the kind words.

[needtobealone]

Great poem MR! Everyting takes time......you'll be ok.

[MR]

But would it be wise to give it to her?

[taken]

i think you should move on, but still let her know how you feel. you will be just fine. your writing is wonderful. it almost made me cry. it made me think of my past and that someone special that is now in it. g0oD lUcK! i hope everything turns out for you. if i were her i would miss you.

[MR]

i think you should move on, but still let her know how you feel. you will be just fine. your writing is wonderful. it almost made me cry. it made me think of my past and that someone special that is now in it. g0oD lUcK! i hope everything turns out for you. if i were her i would miss you.

 

 

It's so hard for me to move on right now, my life has been ripped away and in many ways it's my fault. I'm trying to tell myself I will but you know how these things can go.

Once more a big thank you to the posters for their kind words.

[taken]

mr

it will all just get better. you know when your are at the bottom of your pit the only way to look is up. i hope things get better for you. i promise you that in time you will heal and you will be able to move on. just keep writing and dont look back . it'll all turn out okay in the end.