dollyd Posted June 7, 2005 Share Posted June 7, 2005 I wrote this just before i split with my ex, it really explains how i was feeling. No One Can Hear Me Anymore I cry but I'm Silent I talk but no one listens I'm hurting but it's Painless No one can hear me anymore I'm awake but I'm tired I'm Hungry but I'm full There's sunshine but it's raining No one can hear me anymore I'm happy but I'm lonely I'm excited but I'm Scared I'm joyful but I'm sad No one can hear me anymore. Tell me what you guy's think? Link to comment
freedom Posted June 8, 2005 Share Posted June 8, 2005 i like it very much... the confusion the ru between the let and right side of the brain. Logic against emotions.... thank you for sharing. Link to comment
dollyd Posted June 9, 2005 Author Share Posted June 9, 2005 Thank you for you kind words Freedom, This poem means alot to me it really explains how i felt before,during and aftet my break up, i wanted to express my feelings some how, this is the 1st poem i've written since i left school(many years ago). I gald you like it. Link to comment
freedom Posted June 10, 2005 Share Posted June 10, 2005 funny how we can come up with good stuff when you are in emotional antyx huh??? The human psychology is a complex one Link to comment
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