poem please read and reply

[ang3l2004]

Moving on is very hard,It can be really tough.

But it will get much better after it has been rough.

 

You will feel like noone loves you that you are alone,

You will want to call them up hoping they pick up the phone.

 

You will cry tears of joy and tears of sadness too,

But you will never be alone because you will have you.

 

You may hurt from a heart break and feel u do things all wrong,

But you must keep your head up and try to remain strong.

 

You have to guard your heart from many diff lies,

So when you are holding on you soon find out that it dies.

 

You have to stand your ground and make yourself whole,

You have to mend your heart and dont give away your soul.

 

Dont let yourself be played in a game that is for two,

No matter how hard it is I would much rather be blue.

 

So fight for your happiness and smile a big smile for me,

I am going through a hard time but oneday I will get better and see .

[Trough Lolly]

nice, a tad longish on the verses but good. i like!

[esboogie143]

very nice...so real and true...I want you to live by all of your words...

[ang3l2004]

Thankyou so much

[Elfdrinkingtea]

Going through the same thing right now. I can't seem to get over this girl. Trying though. sigh*

[neva_black_n_white]

wow, you speak the truth and thats the best thing.

 

its honest, and i think its something that should be taken on by others. so yeah.

i like it.

 

Kel.