my poem!!:)

[nosoul]

hey i have a site just for my family to see and i wrote this poem to add to it and its about my boyfriend.plz tell me if u hate it or love it or like or dislike it!! thanx so much!!!cant wait to read ur replys!

 

 

~!~You~*~

As I sit here and really think about you

I realise you make my sky's blue

 

Your everything I want and need

We both take the lead

 

You mean so much to me and I m so scared I m going to lose you

If you dumped me my heart could never be fixed by glue

 

You made me the person I tried to be

You understand me

 

I cry thinking about when you're never in my life

The pain would be as sharp as a knife

 

You're the best thing that ever happened to me

But my worries are as deep as the sea

 

You mean everything to me and more

the way i feel is to the core.

[Optimistic37]

awww I really like it. Its soo simple but just sums up everything!

I love those kind of poems where its just clear. Nice one