Optimistic37 Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 Just wrote this on the spot. Basically just writing what I feel. I wake up, lying, in my waking life with no emotion. I have no feeling about anything or anyone I've been lying there since you went away Each day adds a mark on my guilt for my existence The time starts to fall infront of me as I stare Nothing is there for me to stare at but the blackness. As the sun enters my room I can only weep Each tear adds a mark on my guilt for not being there for you You could have been someone for everyone to have Instead you are attached to nothing My vision begins to blur and a sigh is released slowly It echoes like the sad wind does through an empty forest. Only the empty, lonley animals can hear its cries for help I try to answer back but my voice is stutter of pain and hurt My lips begin to die and my head turns away from the awful sun My face is wet and my heart is dry My body is begging to be held and my eyes need to be seen All i receive are the black stares of the dying animals in the forest They understand me more than myself, yet I do not talk to them I only wish to talk to you and fix my shattered brain Each minute, each second of my life, my body feels less happiness. Come back to me and hold my dry heart Wipe away my tears and walk with me with me in the wind. Link to comment
Gauchori Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 Very nice. It tells a lot about how you are felling. I hope you get better and that, that special someone comes when you don't even think of it and rescues you out of that tight place A friend 8) Link to comment
HappyGoAway Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 Ouch, very eloquent poetry, keep writing! Link to comment
rakumar Posted October 14, 2004 Share Posted October 14, 2004 Great poem truly written from heart i tru way of expressing feeling in simple word keep it up Link to comment
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