phil1981UK Posted August 13, 2004 Share Posted August 13, 2004 Great was life, carefree was life, what happened to those days. Now it seems only unhappiness surrounds me, embraces me and crushes me with a force for which I have no armour. I am told things improve with time, things get better and life goes on, funny how hard it is to see these things through the wall that has been built in front of my eyes. I am in a dark place now, my heart is growing cold, though i am not without hope in my life, as often is the case, there is someone with the power to engulf me with light if they wish to do so, for them all i can do is wait, for them I would give everything. The need to place such importance on one individual is a cruel side effect of being an emotional animal in this world. What ever lies ahead for me, I promise myself never to get into this hell again if happiness does not return, better a cold heart than a broken one. Link to comment
dpressedone89 Posted August 13, 2004 Share Posted August 13, 2004 good poem. very deep Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 13, 2004 Share Posted August 13, 2004 Wonderful poem.Full of emotion. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
Stinkweed Posted August 13, 2004 Share Posted August 13, 2004 Great poem. Keep up the good work. Link to comment
hardcore Posted August 15, 2004 Share Posted August 15, 2004 i must say i liked it that is all since i have dawned a new fase i have not muck to say :scramble: Link to comment
Angel88 Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 WOW! I've been there before. That was powerful! Link to comment
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