ang3l2004 Posted July 23, 2004 Share Posted July 23, 2004 I am screaming I am dying inside, I have to get back my dignity I have to have some pride. I cry and cry but what help does that do, That does not make me happy or bring me back to you. My heart is aching and I am on my way, On my way to happiness because this is a new day. All this time I have been hoping you will see, But if you really have opened your eyes with me is where you would be. When you dont call me I am kinda use to it now, But I still wonder where this hurt came from I still wonder how. But when I think about you I think about how you are not here, Thinking about all the times that it was me wishing you were near. I am the one that was true I was the one that was there, I am the one that is trying and showing that I care. I am the one that loved you and the one that showed it, The spark that I had for you always remained lit. Where are you I am here and always have been for you, Where did your love go so fast u told me this was true. Where are you when im crying or when im hurt inside, Where are you when all I want to do is hide. When will your actions speak louder then anything, When will you do what u said u would do and fix my broken wing? I hope that you remain happy because I wish nothing else but happiness for you, Hoping that everything you told me and everything you said was true quick poem read and reply what you think thanks Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted July 23, 2004 Share Posted July 23, 2004 Good poem, keep writing. You have a very good way with your words and making them all fit together perfectly. I love your writing. Under Link to comment
lunatic Posted July 23, 2004 Share Posted July 23, 2004 I loved it Ang3l keep up the good writing!!! Your so talented with the way you write poetry. Hubman 8) Link to comment
goddess23 Posted July 23, 2004 Share Posted July 23, 2004 its a beautiful poem, and its one i can truly relate to. you also did a great job rhyming lol, and thats tough when you just want to express your feelings sometimes. i have a similar poem, in context, i dont think its as good as yours, but its one that i truly feel. Why does my heart cry every time i think of you? Why does my entire body know it would give itself up for yours? My sadness is overwhelming, it controls my every thought, every action. The stars seem to meaningless dots compared to you, the moon just a speck of dust. I have fear, it comes from the mere idea of not having you near me. The constant shadow of your memory taunts me, drives me insane. The idea of seeing your precious face, or hearing your sweet voice is now an impossibility, I feel guilty for not being there with you, guilty for not knowing about your day. In my dreams i will meet you, in my heart i will feel you. Forever in my heart, always in my prayers. Link to comment
xsomegirlx Posted July 23, 2004 Share Posted July 23, 2004 wow, you guys these poems are awsome! keep writing!! Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 23, 2004 Share Posted July 23, 2004 Your poem was wonderful.You truly do have a way with words.Keep it up Meagan Link to comment
ang3l2004 Posted July 23, 2004 Author Share Posted July 23, 2004 Hey!!Thankyou all so much it is not about being well at writing or being good it is about expressing how you feel through words and keep up the good work your poem was good as well,Thankyou all for reading my poem and replying long as you like them then that makes me smile!! Link to comment
ang3l2004 Posted July 23, 2004 Author Share Posted July 23, 2004 I am waiting for the day you tell me you have met someone new, I am sitting here all alone believing the words you say are true. I know I cannot do this I must move on and let you go, But then my heart tells me no because I love you so. I have not seen the light at the end of this dark mess, But even though its tough I still love you no less. I know there comes a point where everything will show, I will see what is the truth and what is a lie then i'll know. You have not been here for me in 4 months ok, But then again your in and out and I believe what you say. My mind is full of confusion and my heart is filled with pain, But only time will tell me what there is to gain. Mabe my eyes are opening and mabe I am starting to see, But that does not justify the things that you have told me. So I am waiting for this time to pass to see what is good from this, To see if this is meant to be or something that you will miss. I hope that you still have me somewhere in that heart, That mabe good will come from this with our time apart. If it was all a lie you could have told me what was true, So I could start my life over and stop pondering over you. Link to comment
lunatic Posted July 24, 2004 Share Posted July 24, 2004 WOW Ang3l that is another awesome poem!!!! Keep up the good work I love reading your poetry. Hubman 8) Link to comment
jaiva Posted July 26, 2004 Share Posted July 26, 2004 I can tell that you have really been hurt by this person. And I understand/ know that when you give your heart to someone and they take it and crush it it takes a long time to regain your trust in others. I have now found my happiness after a lot of years of hating myself, but it took a year of soul searching as most people call it. Began to soul search before you give your heart away again and then maybe you'll find the perfect person for you after you know who you are and what it is that makes you happy. Jaiva Link to comment
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