Just some poems

[honesttoblog]

I'm an amateur poet- therefore my poetry is rather rubbish. However I needed a way to get out how I was feeling so I've turned to poetry. My work is rather short, odd and dark so I apologise for that.

 

 

Still *

(a poem about my childhood abuse)

 

Voices echo in and out of my ears,

But yours sticks to my lobes,

Like some unwinding never moving nail.

 

Memories collide with nightmares,

In which you are the fashion.

Where some unknown never leaving thing lies.

 

These scars never seem to fade.

Every touch clings to my body,

Like some unsafe never cleansing embrace.

 

Your shape will forever remain,

That murky shadow etched into my mind,

By some unwritable never-ending pen.

 

 

 

Again *

(a poem about someone leaving me for another female again)

 

You'll leave me again,

I know you will.

She'll come back,

Enchant you with her wicked spells,

And you'll be gone.

 

My heart will break,

My head will hurt,

My wrist will bleed,

And the long lost memories will come flooding back.

 

I'll find happiness in every bottle,

In every small pill,

And every love song ever written.

Time will be wasted on thinking about you,

Writing poems you'll read but never get

And puffing my sorrows away.

 

Black will be the only colour I see,

That nothingness that consumes my life.

Lies will fly out of my mouth,

Feelings will flood from my eyes

And confusion will come from my ears.

 

It will all happen.

Again.

 

 

 

Today

(a poem about getting over my ex)

 

Today I will cry into my pillow.

Today I will miss you.

Today my mind will be on you.

Today the hurting won't stop. *

Today I'm not going to get over you.

 

I'm going to get over you today.

The hurting's going to stop today.

My mind won't be on you today.

I won't miss you today.

I won't cry into my pillow today.

[Beoslasher]

Your work isn't rubbish! I really like it! Especially if it helps you feel better then it is already better than you think it is!

 

Anyways!

 

I like a lot of lines in your works like the "Like some unsafe never cleansing embrace", and I love this stanza

 

 

"Black will be the only colour I see,

That nothingness that consumes my life.

Lies will fly out of my mouth,

Feelings will flood from my eyes

And confusion will come from my ears."

 

This stanza is like all the emotions just consume your entire body, and I can relate to this on so many levels in many different situations.

Very excellent work

[JasonVoid]

Got me into a rythym with today!