EmptySoul Posted June 18, 2004 Share Posted June 18, 2004 every cut trying to free this creature inside of me every drop of blood one i'm willing to sacrifice to be FREE. all say no don't honey, baby, that's wrong so i stop for a while and leave the creature alone. can't stop fighting it will attach itself to my soul it'll grow so i cut some more so it'll leave so i can be FREE. now fear blinds them they wonder how long before i cut too deep before i let all the blood fall let my body die and my spirit leave try so hard to fight but i can't stand that look in my mother's eyes as she stares at my arm and she cries and cries so i do as she prays and forget my knife in my drawer while this creature takes over my mind until i'm not me anymore. EmptySoul Link to comment
butterflykiss04 Posted June 18, 2004 Share Posted June 18, 2004 Ok if this is just a poem well its pretty dark and scary or maybe I am not the type to appreciate it sorry. But if it isnt than its scary to know that you are doing this to your self I hope that you can find the same strength that you have to this to get help because life is important and your not just hurting yourself you are also hurting the people who love and care about you I am not going to preach to you but if I could find the strength to stop doing destructive things in my life I hope you cant to! GOD BLESS! Link to comment
tainted_soul Posted June 18, 2004 Share Posted June 18, 2004 yeah i like it... i can't explain it, but i get it. definitely dark, and powerful. keep going... Link to comment
dpressedone89 Posted June 18, 2004 Share Posted June 18, 2004 wow im speechless that was great im glad you still write what your feeling i will too im gonna send you one of my new poems and wow thats scary and descriptive i love it good job -stitches Link to comment
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