puffdaddycurl Posted November 13, 2003 Share Posted November 13, 2003 Hello and thanks for talking your time out of your day to read and help me with my topic. Well just yesterday i decided to write a poem and to me i thought it turned out pretty good but i dont know if good enough to tell my ex-girlfriend later on so i can get her back. well hre it is My love after death I know I did wrong But my heart feels i did right I will keep trying for so long to make the wrong turn right I have thought of you at day and cryed over you at night I wont stop thinking of you until everything feels right Every tear I shead makes my love stronger than might every tear you shed makes me cry harder at night I know you dont love me but that wont make me stop the only time i will is when you love me with all you got I will love you forever even after death I will wait for you in heaven after i have left. Well thats it, if you could give me alittle advise on anything i could change or what you think about it. and if you could please tell me if i should memorize this and tell my ex girlfriend to see if she will take me back into her life. Please and thankyou everyone sincerly PDC A.K.A PuffDaddyCurl Link to comment
enadevoli Posted November 13, 2003 Share Posted November 13, 2003 i really like that poem. i can't say that your ex will take you back after hearing it though. it all depends on how she feels about you. Link to comment
puffdaddycurl Posted November 13, 2003 Author Share Posted November 13, 2003 alright thanks for your advise and complemnt deeply appreciated Link to comment
The Morrigan Posted November 13, 2003 Share Posted November 13, 2003 It's a very intense and emotional poem, nicely done. And I'd have to say - what matters most isn't even how she, or anyone else will react, but that to you, it reflects your thoughts and feelings, always keep in mind that's the really important thing. If it does, you've accomplished something worthy, no matter what anyone else thinks. Link to comment
girllovesboy Posted November 13, 2003 Share Posted November 13, 2003 That is a great poem : ) Link to comment
just_smile Posted November 14, 2003 Share Posted November 14, 2003 hey i thought that your poem was great, i think the fact that you wrote it for someone who means alot to you made it even better. i dont know whether see will take you back, but i hope she does good luck with that ~LJ =; Link to comment
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