bubbles Posted October 4, 2003 Share Posted October 4, 2003 I thought we'd be perfect Together forever But, you found someone else You don't want me Why is it her? Walking with you? Why can't I be the one? You don't want me So many tears for you So many cries I feel so rejected You don't want me I never felt a love so strong But you feel it for someone else I'm broken You don't want me The shadows of them Walking together Haunt my dreams You don't want me Jealousy is the enemy I must fight it And learn not to hate her You don't want me I thought we could make it Me and You But you found her You don't want me Lord, please help me From saying that they would leave each other You don't want me He has her Forever they will always be Without me He doesn't need me Link to comment
sara123 Posted October 5, 2003 Share Posted October 5, 2003 I feel your pain...hang in there...there's someone out there that wants u!!! Link to comment
Shyguy24 Posted October 6, 2003 Share Posted October 6, 2003 hey nice poetry id want u just for that Link to comment
lunatic Posted November 19, 2003 Share Posted November 19, 2003 Hey Bubbles, I was looking through you posts because I really like your poetry. Keep up the great work. Hubman Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted November 19, 2003 Share Posted November 19, 2003 hey. man that was powerful, by repeating 'you dont eant me' it really puts acroos the emotions and feelings in your poem. great work. kel Link to comment
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