karma85

ok thank you i might just do....took me awhile to work on this and try to get it flow more quickly

hey thank you very much i bin considering that...alot on my mind

hey thank you for commenting hun! i'm happy you can relate to this poem i'm sure every one can relate to this poem. i'm sooo bord outa my mind. i do love this guy...but i feel like we are loosen it.you kno the stuff that i said in the poem. i see other couples & on t.v. soo affectionit and sooo in love still. it makes sick but yet feel envy.... u kno

yup thats what its like and thats the feeling thanks for commenting on poem hun!!

i luv this poem

hey thank you sweeite....i'm happy u liked it...and the imagery

Dang...pretty deep stuff. I like it... I like how the story comes together..... And in a way how dark it was i like it good work!... Check out my poem and comment

Thank you guys for showin love

your wellcome any time loved the poem can u comment mine

I wish upon a star....hopeing i find the other part of my hart. I look at these couples today so in love and happy. (IT MAKES ME SICK!!) Cant help but envy how they kissed. And cant remember the last time i was that happy and so i reminsed. And how much i miss the excitement of being in love or feelin blissed. Then I look at the guy i'm with. Is this the man i wanna spend the rest of my life with? Bord out of my freaking mind i wanna take a rope and hang my self and die! Cant remember the last time we celabrated our aniversy And went out just the two of us & none of his friends coming with us Now all we do is stay home...and watch t.v. and F**** WOOOOPEEE DOOOOOOO! I wish i had what they have. I wish i had A conection....but thers nothing but static. I wish to go back in time and feel a connection and just feel love. I feel we are distant growin apart he'll always have a place in my hart. i look at these couples i cant help but cry filled with envy....and missing it all. When love used to make me feel 10 feet tall

your poems amazeing and i luv it...very strong

damn deep sum what dark poem....i liked it you got a talent buddy i like it your good every thing kinda flowed 2gether... can your read my poem?

DAMN ALOTA PAIN IN THIS AND DARKNESS MAMA'S R.I.P. ....CAN U READ MY POEM

THANKS FOR THAT COMMENTS Siraf