Deceitful Dreams

[chickidee23]

The wall came crashing down

And I let myself feel freely

Even though I knew what it would mean

I opened up, made room

And you settled in

Now the pain is flowing freely

But I know you don't mean to

It's my fault for believing so blindly

For allowing myself to hope and dream

For letting the feelings who should belong solely to another

Belong to you as well

Now the tears that refuse to come for the things they should

Are threatening to flow

But I know once they start, they will be merciless

And I demand more of myself

Refuse to show my weaknesses any longer

You will not know

You will not see

As I said before

The only person who can ruin me

Is me

 

 

*This poem is an old one. I've never shared any before so I kind of wanted to see what people thought. Thanks*

[TheFallenShadow]

very good. i like it, it tends to circle around the style and depth that i write with as well. very nice indeed

[chickidee23]

Thanks fallenshadow! I really appreciate the comment. I will be sure to keep an eye out for your poetry

[TheFallenShadow]

you are most welcome for the comment, they are warrentied, however you would be hard pressed to find any of my musing here, as i have taken most if not all of them down. as it is, for me my time for words to flow upon paper, as water in the stream have ends, as such, there is nothing left for me to write.

 

in essense though, continue to write for you and no one else, if anything, find the inpiration in yourself for the writing. It will help ease your soul in some small manner.

 

be well chickidee, and i look forward to reading more of your writings...

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Hey, well what can i say, right at this exact moment i feel that poem so much. As though you wrote the way of my heart. It was really wonderful. Please keep sharing your work.