blueangel Posted November 9, 2006 Share Posted November 9, 2006 Quiet and sustained "What a fine girl we brought up" She walks so confident (Like there's a stick up her butt...) But really... I am upset, sad, terribly passive These days. I need to ease my soul Maybe I need some laughter It's like medicine I've been told The silence of my heart Is tearing my thoughts apart Because I don't know where to go (...It used to lead me, call me home) I say goodbye to friends a lot we go our separate paths, our roads But I only feel passive again When I find I am alone In the end It really is not easy though To find a place, a face, a home. When I face someone eye to eye I begin to see how empty is their life The burdens, the struggles, the torment, the fight I remember the days even I screamed and cried My pain was so profound, but now None of it affects me because nobody helped me out I was left only to help myself ...I had to make myself separate from my emotions And now I can't get them back... "There is God, There is God," is what I tended to sing "You just have to... you just have to believe in yourself To be freeeeeeee...." But what do I really see, behind those words of mine? Is that what you ask? Here's your chance to find Me, who am I inside? I feel myself falling, but then there's this strange call In the seat of my unconscious mind A force so white, so beautiful At night, it's all I see... ..A storm to silence... Is all I find Through the light Of something chilled A way out Another hill To climb and find Myself- Fullfilled Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted November 10, 2006 Share Posted November 10, 2006 Thats a great piece of poetry. Blueangel you have amazing talent. The silence of my heart Is tearing my thoughts apart Because I don't know where to go (...It used to lead me, call me home) That part really got to me because i understand it alot. (Maybe not the way you intended but in my own way anyway) The flow to work work is great and each poem is different. Great work. Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted November 10, 2006 Share Posted November 10, 2006 your poetry is some of the best i've read anywhere. to think that it could get better as you get older truly challenges the imagination. i don't know if i could take it! i think you accidentally typed "change" instead of "chance", though (just to show you that i read the whole thing ). Another hill To climb and find Myself- Fullfilled who writes any better than that? Link to comment
blueangel Posted November 12, 2006 Author Share Posted November 12, 2006 i think you accidentally typed "change" instead of "chance", though (just to show you that i read the whole thing ). Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Ok, I fixed it. Link to comment
blueangel Posted November 12, 2006 Author Share Posted November 12, 2006 Thats a great piece of poetry. Blueangel you have amazing talent. Weiieeeeoooh weeeeiieeeeooh weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! translation: why, thankyou, Rozi. You are just too kind. Really, really you are. Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted November 12, 2006 Share Posted November 12, 2006 Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Weiieeeeoooh weeeeiieeeeooh weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! LOL did we get into Mommy's coffee stash today, or is that just natural exuberance? Link to comment
blueangel Posted November 12, 2006 Author Share Posted November 12, 2006 LOL did we get into Mommy's coffee stash today, or is that just natural exuberance? Oh, it's all natural! Link to comment
bigredvick Posted November 13, 2006 Share Posted November 13, 2006 this is very good. it makes ke want to start writing. Link to comment
blueangel Posted November 14, 2006 Author Share Posted November 14, 2006 Yay! -does little dance- Link to comment
Fallout Posted November 14, 2006 Share Posted November 14, 2006 So you write poetry too eh? Pretty good keep going Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted November 15, 2006 Share Posted November 15, 2006 Love your attitude! Nice to hear some happiness Link to comment
blueangel Posted November 15, 2006 Author Share Posted November 15, 2006 I can't always turn the switch to being suddenly happy, but at any time, I can go from being serious to playful... so I guess that's happiness in a sense. Link to comment
Siraf Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 You know what I think..like all your other poems...beautiful =) Link to comment
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