honey_bee Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 don't be affaird to look at me, the real me, inside my soul is one, the outside is two, if you only knew that i am beatiful, maybee just, maybee you would not be affaird to look at me. the sun is setting and birds are singing there song. Our we a long way from home, just because we are affaird to see that you look like me, and i look like you, just different shades of beauty.. don't please, don't be affaird to look at me. people this to all of us i cry, you cry we all our here on some path another and as we get older life seems just a little more greater so let's just be thankful that we could even read my peom to us today... GOOD LUCK IN LIFE PEACE AND MUCH LOVE.... Link to comment
Momene Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Link to comment
coollady1957 Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 Enjoyed your poem and thoughts. Link to comment
finewhine Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 P-o-e-m spells poem. A-f-r-a-i-d spells afraid. "Life just seems a little more greater" should read, "Life just seems a little greater." Sorry, there are grammar/spelling nazis lurking about, myself among them. Cheers! Link to comment
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