Two poems...

[SkylinesTurnstiles]

Here are two that i wrote.I think there lame but leave som advice if you want

 

The force of you

Breaking me

But now I see how it had to be

I said no

I cried the tears

I head her cries

You got away free

She's now five

She cries every night

Once a year

She stays in bed

And wants to die

She doesn't know her father

She's a daughter of rape

 

 

Out of place

No one under stands you

Run away

Save me

Nothing feels alright

Left in dark

Edge of breaking down

Save me

Stuck in this life

Fake smiles and stupid lies

All the love is gone

Save me

Everything is falling through

It's how it's got to be

Fallen from grace

Please save me

[aymee_lee]

They're not lame. It's never lame if you're speaking from the heart.

 

Is the little girl in the first one your daughter?

[SkylinesTurnstiles]

Thanks.Nah im only 15.Lol

[Ms. Babydoll]

Love them both!!

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Hey babe...

Wow i love them both... You know why. Theyre both great not lame.

 

love ya rozi!

[yeawutever]

That was an intense and deep poem, I love the first one the most. It would suck to find out your father was your mom's rapist and you being the product of it!!!

[SkylinesTurnstiles]

Well actulley the fiirst one is about some one