SkylinesTurnstiles Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 Here are two that i wrote.I think there lame but leave som advice if you want The force of you Breaking me But now I see how it had to be I said no I cried the tears I head her cries You got away free She's now five She cries every night Once a year She stays in bed And wants to die She doesn't know her father She's a daughter of rape Out of place No one under stands you Run away Save me Nothing feels alright Left in dark Edge of breaking down Save me Stuck in this life Fake smiles and stupid lies All the love is gone Save me Everything is falling through It's how it's got to be Fallen from grace Please save me Link to comment
aymee_lee Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 They're not lame. It's never lame if you're speaking from the heart. Is the little girl in the first one your daughter? Link to comment
SkylinesTurnstiles Posted September 3, 2006 Author Share Posted September 3, 2006 Thanks.Nah im only 15.Lol Link to comment
Ms. Babydoll Posted September 4, 2006 Share Posted September 4, 2006 Love them both!! Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 4, 2006 Share Posted September 4, 2006 Hey babe... Wow i love them both... You know why. Theyre both great not lame. love ya rozi! Link to comment
yeawutever Posted September 5, 2006 Share Posted September 5, 2006 That was an intense and deep poem, I love the first one the most. It would suck to find out your father was your mom's rapist and you being the product of it!!! Link to comment
SkylinesTurnstiles Posted September 5, 2006 Author Share Posted September 5, 2006 Well actulley the fiirst one is about some one Link to comment
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