Small apartment

[Boughtandpaidfor]

bathroom of plastic

stale food rots on the balcony

a book causes mess

[PRSOV]

I like your work...

 

but why do you always write three lines? What stops you from writing more?

[Boughtandpaidfor]

I fear what might happen if I dont stop

 

Seriously though, I'm going for Haiku. I read about how its about "showing rather than telling"- so you create images but the reader creates the emotions for themselves. Sometimes I find it so hard to relate to other poems because they're so full of ither people's emotions which I dont really understand.

 

Not trying to be pretentious (I hope) just playing around with it.

[Cid]

I like it too. I see what you meen about the emotion.

[PRSOV]

I fear what might happen if I dont stop

 

Seriously though, I'm going for Haiku. I read about how its about "showing rather than telling"- so you create images but the reader creates the emotions for themselves. Sometimes I find it so hard to relate to other poems because they're so full of ither people's emotions which I dont really understand.

 

Not trying to be pretentious (I hope) just playing around with it.

 

That's great!

 

It's always good to experiement

 

Please keep writing for us and thank you for sharing.

[stolenshadow]

Very nice, I liked it.

[brando]

Good haiku... a book causes mess. great irony.

[yeawutever]

Very interesting poem!!!!!