Boughtandpaidfor Posted August 27, 2006 Share Posted August 27, 2006 bathroom of plastic stale food rots on the balcony a book causes mess Link to comment
PRSOV Posted August 27, 2006 Share Posted August 27, 2006 I like your work... but why do you always write three lines? What stops you from writing more? Link to comment
Boughtandpaidfor Posted August 27, 2006 Author Share Posted August 27, 2006 I fear what might happen if I dont stop Seriously though, I'm going for Haiku. I read about how its about "showing rather than telling"- so you create images but the reader creates the emotions for themselves. Sometimes I find it so hard to relate to other poems because they're so full of ither people's emotions which I dont really understand. Not trying to be pretentious (I hope) just playing around with it. Link to comment
Cid Posted August 27, 2006 Share Posted August 27, 2006 I like it too. I see what you meen about the emotion. Link to comment
PRSOV Posted August 27, 2006 Share Posted August 27, 2006 I fear what might happen if I dont stop Seriously though, I'm going for Haiku. I read about how its about "showing rather than telling"- so you create images but the reader creates the emotions for themselves. Sometimes I find it so hard to relate to other poems because they're so full of ither people's emotions which I dont really understand. Not trying to be pretentious (I hope) just playing around with it. That's great! It's always good to experiement Please keep writing for us and thank you for sharing. Link to comment
stolenshadow Posted August 27, 2006 Share Posted August 27, 2006 Very nice, I liked it. Link to comment
brando Posted August 27, 2006 Share Posted August 27, 2006 Good haiku... a book causes mess. great irony. Link to comment
yeawutever Posted August 28, 2006 Share Posted August 28, 2006 Very interesting poem!!!!! Link to comment
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