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I fear what might happen if I dont stop

 

Seriously though, I'm going for Haiku. I read about how its about "showing rather than telling"- so you create images but the reader creates the emotions for themselves. Sometimes I find it so hard to relate to other poems because they're so full of ither people's emotions which I dont really understand.

 

Not trying to be pretentious (I hope) just playing around with it.

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I fear what might happen if I dont stop

 

Seriously though, I'm going for Haiku. I read about how its about "showing rather than telling"- so you create images but the reader creates the emotions for themselves. Sometimes I find it so hard to relate to other poems because they're so full of ither people's emotions which I dont really understand.

 

Not trying to be pretentious (I hope) just playing around with it.

 

That's great!

 

It's always good to experiement

 

Please keep writing for us and thank you for sharing.

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