NKP Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 I wish i was a bird I would fly away and never look back I wish i was happy So i can feel good once in my life I wish i was smart So i can tell everyone i know I wish my dad was still here Then i can hold him and tell him i care I wish i was free Then i might feel alive I wish i was dead Then i dont have to face this life I wish i could hold you And i would never let you go I wish all this pain can just end I wish, I wish, I wish I can wish all i like But its time to face the truth None of my wishes will ever come true Link to comment
yeawutever Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 Well written poem, I love it!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 a very nice work, kita. but you know there's no reason to believe that your future will be as bad as your past. in fact, it's very unlikely. Ailec, you say the same thing in every thread in Poetry. do you even read them, or are you just padding your post count? Link to comment
NKP Posted August 4, 2006 Author Share Posted August 4, 2006 yeh my future my be good it might not be, i guess i will never know Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 well, there's only one way to find out: survive and thrive! it won't be long at all before you have control over your destiny. be good to yourself, you deserve it. Link to comment
doyathink Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 Ailec, you say the same thing in every thread in Poetry. do you even read them, or are you just padding your post count? I second that question?? Link to comment
Boughtandpaidfor Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 I second that question?? I third it!! Nice poem - I think it's really nice to just wish really hard for stuff sometimes- we tell ourselves we cant have stuff and kind of pretend we dont mind but sometimes it all just floods out!!! It's good to want really badly!! Link to comment
yeawutever Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 Slightlybend I read them all and like them. Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 poetry is an expression of how you feel, if her emotions are consistent and she feels trapped, it may well be that she write similar NOT identical things. Only because films have the similar storylines .. do we stop watching them? no.. theres always something unique about them.. those who post responces to poems are often padding there post counts more than those writing them! (just from my viewpoint) slightlybent.. i love you (not in a confession type of way, but i think your great. That comment was possibly light hearted aswell.. but with the mood im in at the minute (at the minutes ... lol to the brackets in brackets) ive taken it a bit personal). sorry if this offends anyway, its just an expression. neva Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted August 5, 2006 Share Posted August 5, 2006 neva, i was teasing my friend Ailec, not criticizing kita. did you miss that? either way, i'm not offended by your observation. i know you're a nice person. Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted August 5, 2006 Share Posted August 5, 2006 blushes majorally **** yes, yes i did.. ***slowly walks to the doghouse!!** i feel, oh my god, ultimately bad. I think i was on a rant moment (like i put in the original post..lol, there must be an excuse for this somewhere *digs*) sorry hun! neva *blush* Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted August 5, 2006 Share Posted August 5, 2006 LOL no worries, kiddo. i would have been pissed too if i thought someone was knocking kita's poetry! Link to comment
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