Poem, should i send it to her or not??

[wgurttrid]

If you go to the "Relationship" forum, and find a thread titled "Girl Confused, full story, advice?". You can get the full story of what I am going through.

 

What do people think of this poem?

 

" Day & Night "

 

That night ago, when we first met,

As you were walking down your steps.

I didn't know just what to expect,

But I met a girl I would never forget.

 

So we drove out, into the night,

This girl beside me felt so right.

As the night was over and the car parked,

I kissed you then, I felt that spark.

 

As we sat in my car and stared away,

I knew that tomorrow would be a great day.

So we said goodbye, lets do it again,

Couple days later, driving hand in hand.

 

Then came a day, upon your couch,

For the first time I felt the pleasures of your touch.

Not like me I pulled you away,

And so I touched you, and listened away!

 

So on we went, like the waves on a beach.

So close to me yet still out of reach,

We would talk and I would hear you say,

Your too good, go find another girl today.

 

Then a day of pain came to me,

I lost someone dearest to me.

You were there, and we all could see,

This amazing girl, that helped me.

 

And on this day as we laid down to sleep,

I wanted to repay your kindness I had reaped.

So I tried, and you said don't worry about me,

Just close your eyes, and you will see.

 

So with them words, I did as you said,

Felt your touch, your lips, as we shared my bed.

You asked me once, when I truly felt love,

It was right then, with you above.

 

So for the first time, just what did I find,

A girl for me, one of a kind.

You were my day something so right,

But even with the day there has to be night.

 

Then darkness came accross my heart,

Think we are two people, little off the chart.

So I made my peace, and tried to walk away,

But with great pain cause there was something else to say.

 

I might not be perfect, nor will I ever be,

I am a man, that is loyal, and hope you will see.

That I can't stop feeling, when I feel this way,

Cause even with night, I know your my day.

 

On I go, with a hope and a wish,

To be your lover, a special kiss.

I know you need time to sort things thru,

For closure, for life, and for you.

 

In doing so, please don't loose sight,

Of a man that tried to do everything right.

If love is putting yourself last,

Consider me guilty, my verdict cast.

 

This is my story, what else can I say,

I still think of you each and every day.

Sometimes I think this is the end,

But when I hear your voice it all comes back again.

 

So I extend friendship to this girl I know,

Friends is what I offer, I hope it shows.

Sometimes taking things slow, means many things,

To be friends first and see what it brings.

 

(her name delted) I thank you for making me strong,

I have hidden my heart for too very long.

It beats with a feeling I've never felt,

With love, it has started to melt!

[LoveAbleChick7]

I don't really know your situation but that poem is really touching. Hope things work out for you. x

[Holiday]

I think if you put the thought into it, send it. It will be at worst, flattering to the recipient. BTW, I keep all things people write me, mainly because, when I'm really low, I can look back and see that at some point or another, I was the apple of someone's eye.

[yeawutever]

It's a wonderful peom, I'm sure she'll like it. Just give it to her!!!!!!

 

[wgurttrid]

Well I am hearing alot of people say send it, still so unsure what to do...

[wgurttrid]

Just a question, do girls actually like it when a guy sends something like that?

 

What do you girls think when you receive something from the heart?

[AwdreeHpburn]

Just a question, do girls actually like it when a guy sends something like that?

 

What do you girls think when you receive something from the heart?

 

 

I think it depends on the girl.

 

A girl who can't read may not appreciate it as much as one who can.

 

A robotic girl with logic instead of emotions may not care for it as much as say... a human girl

[Holiday]

I speak for myself. I am totally and utterly flattered, but even better if there are bits of it that take me out of context of the relationship and speak to the person I am, rather than the person I am in the relationship, you know? Your poem mostly addresses the person she is in the relationship, which is fine and dandy. I'm just being honest that when I can extract some additional flattery that is derived from his appreciation of me and the individual I am (the special person I am), then I feel more like the poem is not a romance-induced piece, but a deeper reflection that penetrates through all of the deep emotions that run through the course of an early romance or a romance that is not yet made official.

 

In summary, I feel flattered, but also, I wonder what the giver wants in return and what is expected of me. Once I had a secret admirer. I was so flattered, but in knowing who it was, I could not bring myself to thank him for fear that he would actually expect something of me so I let it go. It was just a burden that I did not hoist upon my own shoulders so I pretended to never know his identity which brought him much resentment in the end. Oh well.

[NKP]

Yes alot of girls like it when guys send stuf to them like that, it shows how they really feel and most girls love it

[wgurttrid]

Who here as received something that touched there heart? And also what was the reason, was it to getyou back just or just them showing you how much they love you.

 

And along them lines, what happened, did you get scared off or love them more or see them differently?

[wgurttrid]

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