Whats my worth?

[Jjasonn28]

Ok so this is a first for me, but whatever. I had a spontaneous urge to write, and though ive never shared this kind of stuff before, with anyone, I figure why not? Why not just share this drivel with the world go gentle..

 

I have sacrificed

Stood tall

Still, made to feel so small

 

Picked you up, wiped away your tears

Had your back

When you faced fears

 

But what does it mean

Now that we are apart

Pushed away, a forced new start

 

All my love - a failure still

Drained of life, of love

Of will

 

So now I will run away from fears

Haunting thoughts

Of the past four years.

 

Find a hole where I can hide

This tear drenched journey

I will ride

 

With fantasy's of your saving grace

I'll wither here

Without a face.

[ShySoul]

For your first time writing, that was darn good. Could tell it was from the heart. And that is what makes a good poem, writing about what you feel. If you found it helped you express yourself, keep writing. I liked it. And I hope you feel better about what happened.

[hosswhispra]

Very reflective, touching and expressive, JP....

 

hosswhispra

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Great job! As shySoul said when you wright from yourheart you do it best!