Who Wants To Read A Soppy Love Poem..

[ILLuz1oN]

Dear T

Music was my whole life, and rap was my passion,

Gave me mindstates and feelings you could never imagine,

Cut myself off from the world, HipHop was my guard,

But it was only when I met you that life stopped being hard,

You make every thing easy, though I had doubts at the start,

Slowly, You pulled all the demons outta my heart,

I act careless I don't mean to and I'm not easy to see through,

Actin' like I don't want you when baby I NEED you,

My mother never hugged me, that's why I'm afraid of affection,

And I grew to love my insecurities because they were protection,

Met so much evil as a kid you wouldn't believe what they did to me,

All my rage was released through creativity,

''My heart's the only good in me, won't let nobody take it''..

Made that promise to myself and you made me break it,

Saw men walk all over mum, vowed that wouldn't happen to me,

But I'm in awe of how you face life so passionately,

You're the exception of the rule, my strength yet my weakness,

Silenced by your aura you just leave me speechless,

Tried with all I have to not care, but i wouldn't change you for s**t,

Now if I die tomorrow at least I know that angels exist,

You're every thing i wanna be you've left my life enlighteneed,

The sky's the limit, and because of you my skies have heightened,

Now I'm at a level where I can no longer hide my feelings,

Never knew what it meant to be content, but you define the meaning,

And I'm so glad my plan not to care about you fell through,

Wanna tell the world how I feel but first I gotta tell you,

Can't believe I'm about to say this so hard yet easy,

For once I don't care if I sound needy, you freed me,

And this is the part where I swallow hard, and take a deep breath,

And tell you the girl that doesn't care actually loves you to death..

 

 

Please let me know what you think. Thanx

 

[Dregnought]

Wow, nice poem there. I like it.

no real comments/critasims.

[Shadows Light]

Very nice. Very heart-felt.

[ILLuz1oN]

Thankyou both of you.