From_Now_On Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 I Love the Abuse Killing time Trying to be poetic Feeling lonely Feeling pathetic Feelings are so mixed When everything's out to confuse I love to be loved I love the abuse But I don't understand much of what I want Or need All there is Is feeling All that's left Is me Not so Can't make things better for others Don't care to make them better for myself Want to be handled—held— Want to stay on the shelf Use me til' I'm used up Don't let me go to waste Wanna bleed—a little Wanna touch your face Maybe I'm sick Maybe it's sad -Apologize I'm sorry I want to hurt so badly, sadly Enough It's so …Tragic… I'm trying to be poetic I'm feeling so lonely I know I'm pathetic Feelings entirely twisted Any clarity I'll attempt to confuse I love being loved I love the abuse Link to comment
metallicachica247 Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 i really like this poem/song. it has a lot of great rhyming and feelings behind it. Link to comment
boredguy Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 That poem is really strong and deep. the emotion that drives it is something we probably all feel at some time or the other, and none of us would express. Kudos for doing a great job, in a great poem. very nice rythm and beat to it. Link to comment
PartlySunny Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 Awesome!!! I love it - would make a great song. Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted November 17, 2005 Share Posted November 17, 2005 WOW. look at you go. i thought it was really effective, i like what youve got going there, i could never write like that. I like the way you work with things.. if that makes sense, original anyway! smiles. kell Link to comment
volution Posted November 18, 2005 Share Posted November 18, 2005 Why do people prefer to be abused rather than love? Or hurt themselves rather than feel love? I know how it is to be addicted to pain - for many years I cried myself to sleep, playing unrequited love scenarios through my mind, where I loved someone so deeply, but always, always, ALWAYS, they were taken away by someone horrible and evil, and I could do nothing... I hurt so much inside, the pain became sweet - almost addicitive. I believe perhaps it's something to do with the hormones/chemicals in the body that are released when we feel pain. Perhaps it's possible to become addicted to it... But, are people afraid of the power of real love, that they'd rather stay with someone abusive rather than choose someone loving? Link to comment
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