MR Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 Just wrote this for that certain someone. It didn't really help but maybe someone can take something from it. Let me know what you think, thanks for reading. For You I have no options left, I have no life within me, My love for you isn't enough, Our life together you can't see. I hope you know how much I care, And what I'd do to have you back, Sometimes people are fools, I've certainly been guilty of that. The day you went my world faded away. The darkness is all i have now The torment knowing I was wrong, Each day is one more step into hell. If time would just go back, I'd change the world for you, But such power we can't have, So I'm left crying without you. I miss your smile I miss you what you made me see I miss your laugh, but most of all I miss what you made me. I can't write much more, The tears still cloud my eyes, But know one thing my perfect angel I'm sorry and without you I'll die. Forgiveness may be a step to far I pushed you to the edge and beyond But life I can't change, If only this man could cure his wrongs. So goodbye my perfect girl Keep you head up and god bless Without me your life will move on, And i want nothing for you but happiness. Link to comment
dude123 Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 This poem is great. All I could say is that you have a gift for writing poems. Link to comment
cs20thcenturyfox Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 Hello MR That is a very nice poem, the girl that made you write, she'll regret losing someone like you . Good luck 8) . Link to comment
MR Posted June 19, 2003 Author Share Posted June 19, 2003 Thanks! Just a quick five minute one really. I think she won't really miss me though to be honest. Anyway thanks for the kind words. Link to comment
needtobealone Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 Great poem MR! Everyting takes time......you'll be ok. Link to comment
MR Posted June 23, 2003 Author Share Posted June 23, 2003 But would it be wise to give it to her? Link to comment
taken Posted June 24, 2003 Share Posted June 24, 2003 i think you should move on, but still let her know how you feel. you will be just fine. your writing is wonderful. it almost made me cry. it made me think of my past and that someone special that is now in it. g0oD lUcK! i hope everything turns out for you. if i were her i would miss you. Link to comment
MR Posted June 25, 2003 Author Share Posted June 25, 2003 i think you should move on, but still let her know how you feel. you will be just fine. your writing is wonderful. it almost made me cry. it made me think of my past and that someone special that is now in it. g0oD lUcK! i hope everything turns out for you. if i were her i would miss you. It's so hard for me to move on right now, my life has been ripped away and in many ways it's my fault. I'm trying to tell myself I will but you know how these things can go. Once more a big thank you to the posters for their kind words. Link to comment
taken Posted June 25, 2003 Share Posted June 25, 2003 mr it will all just get better. you know when your are at the bottom of your pit the only way to look is up. i hope things get better for you. i promise you that in time you will heal and you will be able to move on. just keep writing and dont look back . it'll all turn out okay in the end. Link to comment
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