Optimistic37 Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 My friend who died from a stupid drunken driver half a year ago deserves something for her so I'm writing an accoustic song with male vocals (me) and female vocals. Please tell me what u think of the lyrics so far: Empty feelings Enters my head of pure sad blue And the only thing I have left Is the memories of you. Jennie, can you help me out Jennie, can you help me Jennie, can you help me now Jennie, you're the one I want to see Female Voc: Please, I am here And I wont be away from you There's nothing to fear Please, dont forget me Remember, I will help you out Remember, I will help you Remember, theres nothing to fear Please, let me remove the blue Male: Empty feelings Are never going to leave. And the only thing I have left Are the memories of you I grieve. Jennie, can you help Jennie, can you help me please Jennie, can you help me now Jennie, I'll remember you in the breeze. Link to comment
Optimistic37 Posted December 10, 2004 Author Share Posted December 10, 2004 sorry to sound pushing here guys but does anyone think this is any good? Sorry, but I want it to be perfect. Link to comment
Meow18 Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 I think thats a really sweet song and a really sweet thing you are doing for your friend. She must have been really close and really special to you. It shows in your song. Link to comment
marijo2480 Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 I wish I could hear you singing it. It sounds like a beautiful song!!! Marie Link to comment
Optimistic37 Posted December 11, 2004 Author Share Posted December 11, 2004 thanks for the feedback guys Yeh, she was very close to me and I'm writing this song so that I can feel that I've shown how much she means to me. I never told her that I loved her and I wish i did. Link to comment
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