The rain

[The Enigmatical Mr X]

I watch the rain,

All the same.

It makes its way,

Down the window pane.

It knows its course,

And carves its path.

From unseen source,

Unsurpassed.

 

I watch the man,

Fight with his wife.

See how she stands,

And how she lies.

She knows her place,

Under his spell.

A broken face,

A frightened girl.

 

I watch the boy,

Play with his dog.

And their joy,

No right or wrong.

They do not hear,

The shouts or screams.

They do not feel,

The falling rain.

 

I watch the sun,

Becalm the sky.

He is young,

She is shy.

They smile and flirt,

And blush as one.

That perfect first,

For everyone.

 

I watch the moon,

Join the stars.

I remember you,

And know it's hard.

For released from here,

I would be brave.

Yet I fear.

 

 

And watch the rain.

[under_the_pressure]

The Enigmatical Mr X,

 

That poem was ...more than great. I really enjoyed it. The rhythm was great and everything fit together so perfectly. I really hope to see more of your poetry.

 

Under*

[i_hate_the_world47]

That was amazing. It flowed so well.Wlecome to enotalone and i hope to see more poetry from you in the near future.

 

~Meagan~

[2rublueeyes21]

that was a great poem! good job...will be watching for more great ones.

[The Enigmatical Mr X]

I'm glad you liked the style, it's one of my favourites.

[ForAnother]

Excellent. i love it. Especially the Sun verse... I think most of us know that feeling

 

ForAnother

[Gauchori]

That was really nice. I enjoyed it