Torn

[xthe core enemyx]

'Torn'

 

You told me that you hated me

You made me sink

You tore me to pieces and broke my heart

 

From all the pain and the hate you placed upon me

I have grown to be a stronger person

You told my sister and me that we were nothing

Ripped out our hearts and threw them away

 

You were never there for the first 9 years of my life

Then mother died and you suddenly appeared

To kill me slowly with every tear I shed

 

You pushed me to my breaking point

Now I'm just a broken doll

Shattered

And you can't fix me

 

Look at me, please tell me what you see

Just a rag doll you can throw around

All my limbs in different places

I can't get out of this place

I'm suffocating

 

Now I'm stronger and you're dead

You can't hear the voice inside my head that pushes me to live

I thank you for hurting me and making me see

My life was almost perfect

Then it all came crashing down

 

I may be happier now

But my heart contains scars that will never heal

And will forever more be

Torn

 

'Dedicated to my so called 'father' that ripped me apart and made me hate myself. without him i wouldn't be as strong as I am today.'

[xthe core enemyx]

This actualy isn't a poem i wrote. my sister did.

[lunatic]

WOW

 

What an amazing poem such feeling such conviction. All I can say is WOW!!! Tell your sister to keep up the good work.

 

Hubman

[Fundamental]

Very deep... I like it. It's really good.

[Stinkweed]

Very good. It really expresses very deep feelings. I don't think I could write that good ever. Your sister receives my standing ovation.

[XxBury me DeepxX]

Thank you all. and thanks krissy for posting my poem.

[ShySoul]

Great poem. I could really feel the emotion and anger behind it.

[i_hate_the_world47]

Bury me deep

Your poem was wonderful.Alot of thought and effort went into it u can tell =D>

The core enemy

I read you poem it was called pieces.It was the best poem i hve read in a long time.Excellent =D>

 

Meagan