mogurl Posted April 7, 2004 Share Posted April 7, 2004 Yeah, I haven't wrote a poem in a while...but this is just how I'm feeling right now. ---------------- You say you love me, you want to be friends, those words slice through me, when will the pain end? We were in love, I gave you my all, everything precious, my life I would give. But I hurt you, I gave you pain, I pushed you away, and now you're gone. Here I am… I can't get over you. I think of you every second, every night, I dream of you. You've got a new girl now, and I hate it, it's true, I'm so jealous. I want to be with you. I'm carrying our baby, I hope it's just like you. I love it so much, or maybe I just love you. But I hate you so much. You're hurting me, too. I can't be just friends. I can't talk to you. I can't stand how you smile, I can't stand how you touch, I can't stand you holding my hands, I can't hate you enough. What I hate the most, is the same thing I love. You won't hate me, you won't give up. You want to be there, you want to stay friends. But darling, I hate you. Cant we just end? I want you in my life, I want our baby to have you, but I love you so much, that I hate you. Link to comment
mogurl Posted April 7, 2004 Author Share Posted April 7, 2004 by the way...feel free to respond Link to comment
just_smile Posted April 8, 2004 Share Posted April 8, 2004 hey wow i really like your poem, i think it fulfilled the way you feel to the depths, i believe the only way to hate someone is if you have once loved them and that is the only way that you truly know your feelings towards them, if that makes sense and i feel that your poem portrayed that, so i really like it, and if you are pregnant then congratulations and i wish you the best in the future. nice poem, keep writing. ~LJ =; Link to comment
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