random_angel Posted March 26, 2004 Share Posted March 26, 2004 ME dont face me degrade me turn away ....coz i hate me cant stand the way i act cant stand the lies cant understand the lows cant control the highs dont understand my reason dont understand my mind like a field full of butterflies grey is hard to find watch you scratch your head watch your mind race dont look at me i know im out of place dont face me degrade me turn away .... coz i hate me STALKERS POINT OF VIEW (this one is obviously a joke between me and one of my friends) I stand outside your window, shivering in the cold I watch you rub your hands, the ones i long to hold i see your lips moving, you must be on the phone I watch you laugh and smile ... and i await for you to change your tone I dont want you to talk to her, or acknowledge her existence You want someone like me, who has proven to be persistent I watch you get up, and i see you turn on your light You look so mad "where are you bitch" .... like you want to fight You see me by the window, and look at me like im a freak Do you know i love you? Do you see the tear on my cheek? but this is how i see you, from a stalkers point of view all i secretly wanted to do ..... is watch you SCARS force of habit unusual life keep score on your arm with a knife each cut marks misery anger or pain cuts turn to scars visable like a stain my life is now a story carved in my arm until the day that i succeed i will continue to cause this harm Thats all from me for now ... feedback would be really nice thanks *kiss* PEACE Link to comment
iabu_com Posted March 26, 2004 Share Posted March 26, 2004 Have you heard of the girl that couldn't stop washing her hands ? She felt so filthy that she was washing her hands until bleeding... Here, failure pushes the subject to an altered metal state of pesonal degradation and other forms of self punishment. This state of mind has the purpose of self-education to avoid future failure but it can also get to depression that causes chained failure. If you fall the best thing to do is rise up, smile and try again. How about some Power Puff Girls pinkish lyrics ? Link to comment
lil_unique_me Posted March 26, 2004 Share Posted March 26, 2004 im sorry jabu_com but i totally disagree with you!!!! i found them all very good and i particularly empathised with the ME poem as this is how i fell most of the time! The stalkers one- well that was just plain funny and the other one well thats just true as well cos i do exactly th same and have been doing for some time now! Thankyou for sharing your poetry with the forum its great!!! Catie xxx p.s please write more of it! Link to comment
random_angel Posted March 26, 2004 Author Share Posted March 26, 2004 thanks guys for your response ima keep writing, i'll try and put some more stuff up *kiss* PEACE Link to comment
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