A KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOR

[bubbles]

In this world full of hurt and pain,

I need someone who would help me through the rain.

To comfort me when Im sad,

Doing everything just to make me glad.

 

In this world I need a Brave Knight,

Who would never give up any fight.

A knight who would dry away my tears,

Telling me to overcome my fears.

 

A knight who loves me for who I am inside,

With him there's nothing more I need to hide.

A person who will still be standing strong,

Eventhough everything has gone wrong.

 

I need someone who is willing to give me more,

Someone I can call my Knight In Shining Armor.

[sphinx999]

Nice poem I can totally relate to you, it sounds a bit like a fantasy story.

[just_smile]

hey

i think that is a really cool poem, i liked it alot, keep on writing

 

~LJ =;

[neva_black_n_white]

i thought it was a great poem if i was to adapr it i would have said to change one line to ''showing me a way through all my fears'' in replace of what you put ''Telling me to overcome my fears.''

 

i love your poem though, it was something Id adapt for rhythm, I liked it though.

Kel