Aaron20b Posted March 23, 2008 Share Posted March 23, 2008 If I am allowed. I would like to post a picture of her She said she used to be into poetry and well. kinda want to surprise her by writing one about her Link to comment
Timebandit Posted March 23, 2008 Share Posted March 23, 2008 If I am allowed. I would like to post a picture of her Beautiful ain't she? She said she used to be into poetry and well. kinda want to surprise her by writing one about her I think she would find you posting a link to a picture of her and asking someone else to help you write poetry about her... well.... creepy. You may want to reconsider if this post is appropriate. Link to comment
JadedStar Posted March 23, 2008 Share Posted March 23, 2008 I was going to say the same thing. Ken, i'd remove her profile...it's posted w/out her permission. Link to comment
Aaron20b Posted March 23, 2008 Author Share Posted March 23, 2008 Well....she doesn't know about it and I really want write her one. please help me. Link to comment
annie24 Posted March 23, 2008 Share Posted March 23, 2008 agreed. and how old is she? Link to comment
JadedStar Posted March 23, 2008 Share Posted March 23, 2008 Annie i thought she looked about 14. I am glad i am not the only one that thought this... Link to comment
Aaron20b Posted March 23, 2008 Author Share Posted March 23, 2008 don't worry. she is 18 Link to comment
Portage Posted March 24, 2008 Share Posted March 24, 2008 Why don't you start it and we will critique your work? Link to comment
JeckyllNHyde Posted March 24, 2008 Share Posted March 24, 2008 Add somethig in the poem about her blue eyes. Link to comment
Aaron20b Posted March 24, 2008 Author Share Posted March 24, 2008 This is why I need the picture up guys. We can't do the poem without the picture. I am sorry but it has to be up. Hmm. any ideas on what I can say about her eyes? Link to comment
annie24 Posted March 24, 2008 Share Posted March 24, 2008 Moderator note - i have removed the link of the pic. you don't have permission to post it, and enough members here are disturbed with posting someone's photo here. the photo is of a young lady who looks quite young, i'd guess 13/14, even if she says 18. she has dark hair and blue eyes and is in a garden. Link to comment
Aaron20b Posted March 24, 2008 Author Share Posted March 24, 2008 ok ok fair enough -_- So. can somebody help me here? Link to comment
JadedStar Posted March 24, 2008 Share Posted March 24, 2008 Like portage said you start it and we'll critique. Evilken just be sure she isn't a young girl posing as 18. You don't need the headache. she looks VERY young. Link to comment
Portage Posted March 24, 2008 Share Posted March 24, 2008 ^ Yes i mirror JS, she looks 12 to be honest. Link to comment
Aaron20b Posted March 24, 2008 Author Share Posted March 24, 2008 um....GUYS! I know this girl IN PERSON! I know she is 18. haha XD Link to comment
JeckyllNHyde Posted March 24, 2008 Share Posted March 24, 2008 Ok. Well just start the poem, and we'll critique as so many have already said. To be honest yea we didn't need the pic. You could have also said she had deep blue eyes, and black hair. Easy. Neways, best of luck with the poem, write it from the heart about her. Try and write some words about her like blue, black, and whatever else you associate with her. Then find words which rhyme with THOSE^^ words. And put them into sentences. Easy way to make a poem. Oh and we don't know her that well to make a poem about her and her character, only you do. Link to comment
Jeen Posted March 24, 2008 Share Posted March 24, 2008 Dark hair blue eyes and in a garden mmmm alot like Annie's avi. With those dark blue eyes. I can't argue. I've lost my hart. To you my love. My day's are filled. With dreams of you. For times to come. And for we had. My hart is yours. To have and to hold. For ever and ever. Till death do as part. Just try you will find a way to write.Just let your emotions do the work. Get the pic in your head, and see her move as you write. Link to comment
Diggitydave Posted April 12, 2008 Share Posted April 12, 2008 Anything from anyone of us would be from ........us, not you...write how YOU feel, thats what's important to her. Link to comment
hodgo Posted April 15, 2008 Share Posted April 15, 2008 well my ex bf who im still into used to write poetry to me all the time, he was one hell of a writer and so because of this ive taken a fancy to ur cause. i didnt see the pic but i remember the first thing he ever wrote to me was about my eyes. now cos i dont know you u can steal the line but really you shouldnt cos its gotta come from your heart and the things u admire about her. the line was "your eyes shine like the brightest star in the sky" and then it went on about how beautiful and wonderful i was and ive loved him ever since. p.s that was 6 years ago. Link to comment
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