Daddy Bear Posted August 30, 2007 Share Posted August 30, 2007 permanent glue permanent marker permanent two all-day sucker there ain't a thing really guaranteed to last now I smell the rain clouds are gonna come on fast flower in bloom flower bright color flower too soon gone by summer the best crash one that you can walk away from where it lies and I can pretend I don't ever mind goodbyes chains do break frames do topple planes do collide keep yourself buckled fur will fly sweater unravel woman do cry welcome to Babel, son nothing stay white here everything it cover in mud horse lose shoe bird lose feather dog losing you gotta have weather the best crush one that you can walk away from when it dies and I can pretend I don't ever see your eyes parts of dolls will survive us all and millions of sh*tters but none of our walls hey now gotta walk away when it dies Link to comment
Lana0120 Posted August 30, 2007 Share Posted August 30, 2007 That's pretty good. I can almost feel like how it should be read too, very fast. It's different from some of your other work posyed on here. Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted September 1, 2007 Author Share Posted September 1, 2007 Thanks, folks. Yeah, Lana, it is a little different for me; not only in word style, but also because it's more hypothetical than autobiographical, unlike most of my other songs - er, I mean poems. Leastwise, I hope it is. Link to comment
CallingAllAngels Posted March 1, 2008 Share Posted March 1, 2008 Love it SB...absolutly love it... Link to comment
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