stbz Posted August 13, 2007 Share Posted August 13, 2007 whats she doing now? is she with him? does she love him? more than she ever loved me? is he doing things better than i did? making her smile more than i could? making her laugh more than i ever did? touching like i never could? does she remember me? will she remember me? do i want her to remember me? why do i care? .... because i felt love. by Michael "Stbz" Quaife. This is the only so-called poem ive ever written, it might seem like crap, but it felt right. Thank you for reading it. Link to comment
Gracelove Posted August 13, 2007 Share Posted August 13, 2007 I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! And I don't usually read poetry. 1 Link to comment
stbz Posted August 13, 2007 Author Share Posted August 13, 2007 I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! And I don't usually read poetry. you have no idea how much you just cheered me up Link to comment
Gracelove Posted August 13, 2007 Share Posted August 13, 2007 Really? I'm glad to hear that! Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 14, 2007 Share Posted August 14, 2007 That is really really touching.. It like hit me. No poetry if crap if it means something to the person who wrote it. Well maybe i'm just in denial But seriously that was a really lovely piece. 1 Link to comment
Recommended Posts