TheFallenShadow Posted June 26, 2007 Share Posted June 26, 2007 Behind the mask, Behind the veil, Secrets, pain, sorrow revealed Appearances’ are As what we see Not really knowing, what’s behind the scene? You say things are fine As do I, Covering the truth within a smile Painted on for the world to see Not know the struggle internally Fortune, playing out cruel fate My time in the light and love is over Returned to who I was before you Dark, brooding, everything at arm length Turning into the mists of the future Drowned in the shadows of the past There can never be another you… You brought out the best in me When together, a tenderness that I thought had gone Now there is only callous cold unfeeling stone That is what the world see’s Now no one can get to me Except…. In the night when I miss you so Longing for your touch, a smile… Then the castle walls around my heart Blow over like a house of cards… Feelings and emotions turbulent and flaring Leaving me scattered and disheveled… Alone…with only my thoughts of you…. Link to comment
ButterflyWrists Posted June 26, 2007 Share Posted June 26, 2007 Aww, thats a really sweet poem =) well done.. keep writing Link to comment
Cletharin Posted June 27, 2007 Share Posted June 27, 2007 Beautiful. Incredibly well written. I wish you the best of luck on any upcoming poems. Link to comment
TheFallenShadow Posted June 27, 2007 Author Share Posted June 27, 2007 thank you both for the compliment on my muse. Link to comment
ButterflyWrists Posted June 28, 2007 Share Posted June 28, 2007 Lovely poem... Write more! Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted June 28, 2007 Share Posted June 28, 2007 I feel for you, man. I see that my previous comments have not had any positive effect. I hope you do make some emotional progress soon. Link to comment
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