Ttom Red Posted June 17, 2007 Share Posted June 17, 2007 Written for the love of my life, who called me while attempting to kill herself. She's now locked away for a few weeks in a hospital, and I can only talk to her about a half hour a day, an that's the worst part of it all (Sorry all, I included swears at parts where I can't change them or it won't flow, so I just used *'s to block a few letters) --------------------------------------- Welcome to the problem there's lots to see yet not much to do and no matter what it's bound to kill you Let's make a little swap Just take my simplicity I'll take your ghosts, pain, secrets and misery Why are you locked in and when will I get out? When will you be back and what's this blood about? Don't bleed, what did you do? I'd do what I can for it to stop I should just be bleeding for you I would if I could but we can never swap Anything for happiness is bull **it perhaps I'm talking in the moment but just to see you again would be it all this sh ** would become pleasant But for now it's all **it and for now I'll say **ck it and from you I'll need breathing and for me it's that or there's nothing Link to comment
perfectliljewel Posted June 17, 2007 Share Posted June 17, 2007 i'm so sorry about your wife. i hope she gets better and y'all are reunited. you're very talented, i like your poem a lot. i like the way you were able to use your words to bring me into your emotions and how you expressed the way you feel without saying anything about your emotions. Link to comment
Ttom Red Posted June 17, 2007 Author Share Posted June 17, 2007 actually, not my wife, and I'm only 16... hah. Thanks for the compliments on the poem though, and thinking it's my wife really just shows how I care about her so much people could very well mistaken us as married, which is also funny at 16 years of age Link to comment
perfectliljewel Posted June 17, 2007 Share Posted June 17, 2007 ya, i saw that where you were posting on my thread, i was like...wait a second i'm confused. ya i know how that is, i'm like that with my boyfriend haha. (sadly we've only been dating for 2 weeks...but i've liked him for over 2 years). again, hope all turns out well, and i guess i'll just consider y'all married lol. if you ever need to talk PM me, and i think my AIM is in my profile(i have MSN and Yahoo as well). i'm almost always online Link to comment
Ttom Red Posted June 17, 2007 Author Share Posted June 17, 2007 Will do, my SN is in my profile as well, and PM-ing works Link to comment
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