Ttom Red

This poem makes ME wet too, and I'm a guy! It's that good!! hah, kidding of course, but in all seriousness this is a really good poem, I like it a lot

I think Hazlenut sooorta overreacted, don't gotta apologize Funny poem shared with others on a forum, it's not like she stole it and sold tickets to read it, and hazlenut, do you KNOW illusionglimps in real life? So how would she "know when it's YOU posting here?" heh, not yellin at hazlenut, but thought it was a funny overreaction

hah, very original, and funny as hell I like it a lot, and I'm not a woman

Will do, my SN is in my profile as well, and PM-ing works

actually, not my wife, and I'm only 16... hah. Thanks for the compliments on the poem though, and thinking it's my wife really just shows how I care about her so much people could very well mistaken us as married, which is also funny at 16 years of age

Written for the love of my life, who called me while attempting to kill herself. She's now locked away for a few weeks in a hospital, and I can only talk to her about a half hour a day, an that's the worst part of it all (Sorry all, I included swears at parts where I can't change them or it won't flow, so I just used *'s to block a few letters) --------------------------------------- Welcome to the problem there's lots to see yet not much to do and no matter what it's bound to kill you Let's make a little swap Just take my simplicity I'll take your ghosts, pain, secrets and misery Why are you locked in and when will I get out? When will you be back and what's this blood about? Don't bleed, what did you do? I'd do what I can for it to stop I should just be bleeding for you I would if I could but we can never swap Anything for happiness is bull **it perhaps I'm talking in the moment but just to see you again would be it all this sh ** would become pleasant But for now it's all **it and for now I'll say **ck it and from you I'll need breathing and for me it's that or there's nothing