this is my first poem,
so yea any sugestions (other then spelling) would be nice 8)
alone i feel.
Alone i feel when im with you,
alone i feel when i am not,
but please go away,
leave me,so alone is all i got,
i cant be near you,
but to be separated is worse,
all alone i wait,
for a chance to show my worth,
you tore my heart out so i cant feel,
leave me bleeding trying to heal,
as my wound gets coverd i see you near,
and as you come a single tear,
knowing that i love you so,
the longing for you begins to grow,
i look down then at her face,
she made it clear i know my place,
i turn around and say goodbye,
she begs me to stop as she crys,
i jumped off before her eyes,
its not her fault i couldnt heal,
i did this so, alone i'd no longer feel.