<polka-dots> Any thoughts?

Read it once more before bed

Your letter that I’ve read

More times than I’m sure you meant

But you can’t control that

Any more than I can control the way

You put no apostrophe between the I and the M

So that’s what I do

Before sleep comes my way for the second time today

And there’s nothing more that I can say about it

Are you there?

Still in that house, the room below the house?

In which I gave to you the things I never meant to give

Your laundry everywhere

It’s not the same thing

As what polka-dots your bedroom floor

**Any thoughts are appreciated. Thanks guys

-Twist

I love it!

I love it!

Thank you!

I like as well. Really enjoyed the second stanza.