lil_baby_girl Posted April 26, 2007 Share Posted April 26, 2007 knife and bald feels so right the feeling of my skin riping the taste of blood in my mouth the sight if blood prowling out my arm the relief of pain throw out my body the arge to do it more the freedom of pain it gives to me i don't see how is wrong its as natural as you and me Link to comment
girl friend Posted April 26, 2007 Share Posted April 26, 2007 You really feeling that bad still? Link to comment
lil_baby_girl Posted April 26, 2007 Author Share Posted April 26, 2007 You really feeling that bad still? ya, but its still a kinda good poem. Link to comment
girl friend Posted April 26, 2007 Share Posted April 26, 2007 Btw amazing poem, i love the way you've worded it, especially the last line. Talent shines through as usual X Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted April 29, 2007 Share Posted April 29, 2007 I like your poem, though i wish you didnt have to feel the emotions that cause yo to write such poetry. Link to comment
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