shorty20 Posted November 20, 2006 Share Posted November 20, 2006 for my fiance, my soldier... he's everythign i've ever wanted and needed in a man. Only 31 more days till our wedding!!! Another day Another night The end of waiting In clear sight Another smile Another tear I just can't wait 'Till you are here Days are dull Nights are cold This endless waiting Is getting old But I'm still here Waiting for you I'd do it again If I had to It doesn't get easy Watching you leave It doesn't cause me Any less grief But the wait is worth it When I see you smile It's worth all the tears Separated by the miles I know this is love Because it hurts so much But I still want it Still need your touch So don't be sad The end is in sight We're almost there And we'll be alright Link to comment
FortunateOne Posted November 20, 2006 Share Posted November 20, 2006 Hey, I'm not into poetry, but darn it it was beautifully moving, way to go. Link to comment
gfein347 Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 Like MoneyGod said, I usually stay away from poetry, but your poem really made me wish I was with my girlfriend. I'm sure your fiance will love it. Well done! Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted November 23, 2006 Share Posted November 23, 2006 Sweet I really like it! Link to comment
nomoretears4uboo Posted November 24, 2006 Share Posted November 24, 2006 I loved it!! more! more! lol Link to comment
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