autumn Posted October 11, 2006 Share Posted October 11, 2006 We fell Did you forget that we once fell, Blindsighted, Unprepared? Was it clouds of new love, or of past misery? We fell in love, And to that end, Moments were seized, Memories were etched. If I forget now, Then you, My love, and yours, was worth nothing. Can I blame loving you, For how much it hurts? And if this dies, What is forever? Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted October 11, 2006 Share Posted October 11, 2006 Thats so sweet, the last to lines are just so nice. Its a great poem. Link to comment
Ms. Babydoll Posted October 12, 2006 Share Posted October 12, 2006 That's is really nice!!! It kinda ends sadly but that gives it so much more strength and beauty in the words, well done Link to comment
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