MissingmyBestfriend Posted October 10, 2006 Share Posted October 10, 2006 For real? Do you mean what you say? I realize, see and feel the emotional pain Seeing your picture brought me a frown Wishing your broken promises wouldn't abstain Your actions are causing our friendship to drown Words can deceive…please be calm…. make sure to refrain I wish to see, hear and feel the truth; don't mistake me for a clown Your hidden anger seriously untamed. It can't sustain Look into my eyes then rationalize my frown My soul bearish emotional pain My hopes of us reconciling are way down You love me you proclaim but my heart is stretched with strain Four years and counting, good times gone bad…see my frown Your presense I endear though I hurt deep inside… my tears flowing like the rain Respect and Trust goes together; Words and actions brought astound You're promises doesn't equal your actions; hurt and pain I want nothing more than our friendship to abound Quit lying and quit going insane Truth and Honesty, How does that sound? Link to comment
lost_status Posted October 10, 2006 Share Posted October 10, 2006 hi! I think it sounds great! I like it, theres so much emotion in it! Link to comment
AwdreeHpburn Posted October 10, 2006 Share Posted October 10, 2006 missing - I was going to say thie same thing as lost_status did. Your feelings come accross really well. You have a gift for expressing yourself....... Link to comment
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