Ms. Babydoll Posted September 26, 2006 Share Posted September 26, 2006 The air brisk and chilly My mind open to all possibilities My eyes open to the dark surroundings My ears open to every subtle sound On my own Walking down the empty roads Only a few cars pass by me The only source of light coming from the street lamps I breathe in the fresh air Letting my lungs stretch wide I need this peaceful darkness To help me think Houses are lit up Giving warmth to my cold body I hear a noise from behind Turn with fright But nothing is there Aware of how dangerous Walking alone at night can be But not afraid Because I'm strong at heart I smile to myself It's all going to be ok Everything works out In the end But every ending Is a new beginning I open up the front door to my house Allowing myself to step inside my world My new beginning My walk in the night has come to an end Link to comment
sumguy Posted September 26, 2006 Share Posted September 26, 2006 Walking at Night time is one of my most favourite things to do, and you captured the essense of the intimate solitude and isolation of it beautifully. =) Link to comment
MollyElise Posted September 26, 2006 Share Posted September 26, 2006 I also love walking alone at night and find this poem catches the spirit of it magnificently. Thank you for sharing it! Link to comment
Ms. Babydoll Posted September 27, 2006 Author Share Posted September 27, 2006 thanks for your precious words, I'm glad you both enjoyed it Link to comment
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