AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 4, 2006 Share Posted September 4, 2006 Broken I was, Left behind to die. Shaken I was, My only shield was to lie. Then you found me, The pain so hard to describe, You helped me, Helped me feel better deep inside. No longer do I feel alone, Now I feel at rest. No longer do I face this alone, I know you truly are the best. Thankyou for letting me smile, Thanks for all the hugging. Thankyou for making me smile, Thanks even for you're bugging. Without you I could have died, You never left my side. Without you I would have died, Never leave my side. I need you now, My father you have become. Don't let me down now, For it is because of you I am this person I have become. Link to comment
Ms. Babydoll Posted September 4, 2006 Share Posted September 4, 2006 that's a beautiful poem, I really enjoyed reading it Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 5, 2006 Author Share Posted September 5, 2006 Thanks, without this guy i don't know where id be today Link to comment
yeawutever Posted September 5, 2006 Share Posted September 5, 2006 You're very creative alright. He sure help you find your way out but do remember that you can stand on your own too. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 6, 2006 Author Share Posted September 6, 2006 Yeah but sometimes you need someone there. At the moment i really do. I don't know where i'd be if it wasn't for him Link to comment
SkylinesTurnstiles Posted September 6, 2006 Share Posted September 6, 2006 Hey i love the poem Babe.Yeah his is like your father.ANd its cute how he thinks of sorta like daughter Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted September 6, 2006 Share Posted September 6, 2006 that was pretty amazing indeed. i can really relate .. obviously to a different person, mine wouldnt be the becoming of a father to me, but i have someone whos affected me SO significantly right now. i appreicate everything they have done.. especially the nagging i love it, was captured and expressed clearly. quite the artist neva Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 7, 2006 Author Share Posted September 7, 2006 lol thanks neva! I'm glad you found someone who changed your life to. Itsa an amazing feeling just to know that people care isn't it. Link to comment
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