jaiva Posted September 2, 2006 Share Posted September 2, 2006 My beloved has died There was no funeral No plot to shed tears Nor pots of wilted flowers My beloved has changed Into this unknown person Whose priorities are not the same And don't mesh well with mine Because of these grave discrepancies My beloved went one way And I another Causing a part of me to die So now my beloved has the freedom to be Freedom he felt never existed And I am left Mourning the loss of my best friend Jaiva Link to comment
jaiva Posted September 2, 2006 Author Share Posted September 2, 2006 Ummm.. NO!!! Try rereading it. Link to comment
Tigris Posted September 2, 2006 Share Posted September 2, 2006 Oops sorry. I've read it again and realised what it meant. Link to comment
kittenmoomoo Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 Jaiva, I love your poem. I can definitely relate to it. Thanks for sharing it. Link to comment
BrokenBlackWolf Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 wow...that brought tears to my eyes(but it doesnt help that im worried about losing my boyfriend...) Link to comment
jaiva Posted September 4, 2006 Author Share Posted September 4, 2006 Ur welcome Kitten. BBWolf don't worry about losing him. If he wants to go let him. He'll realize what he had and you'll have something better by then. If he doesn't treat you like the Princess you are are meant to be treated like then he definitely needs to go. I love my ex to life, death and then back again. But if he can't learn to treat me better than we can never be ever again. Jaiva Link to comment
Ms. Babydoll Posted September 4, 2006 Share Posted September 4, 2006 beautiful poem!! Link to comment
jaiva Posted September 4, 2006 Author Share Posted September 4, 2006 Thank you Babydoll! Jaiva Link to comment
yeawutever Posted September 5, 2006 Share Posted September 5, 2006 Thanx for sharing it, I love it and sorry about the loss of your friend. Link to comment
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