ftc Posted August 28, 2006 Share Posted August 28, 2006 only slow moves remain to to save your day in heart beats and broken arrows who will save your day in all that you deliver a shimmering delicate flow in all that exists because all that you deliever are lies and decite your skin like an empty cavity empty and dark you left a blood stain on my heart hide from yourself and watch how you disappear in your darkness and disappear i will wait for you in the sunshine bright with the doves singing in the cool light breeze they say this is life some like the dark they find refuge in it hiding way below all their stones of hatered their prisions of disbelief their rubble of life. shelter me from their darkness take me to the sunshine where there is peace where the sun shines brightly against my once kept sheltered skin where my eyes can envision the escape where the flowers smell their sweetest. Link to comment
AdviceGuru Posted August 28, 2006 Share Posted August 28, 2006 *edits post* my mistake (oops) Link to comment
yeawutever Posted August 28, 2006 Share Posted August 28, 2006 Well written, I like it a lot!!!!!!! Link to comment
Ms. Babydoll Posted August 29, 2006 Share Posted August 29, 2006 I really really really LOVE it!! Gosh it's amazing!! Incredible! Well Done, keep it up! Link to comment
ftc Posted August 29, 2006 Author Share Posted August 29, 2006 thanks for the comments guys, much appreciated. Never really wrote poetry before, but it's amaizing what you come up to when you bulked down with thoughts and emotions, it just flows out ! Link to comment
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