NKP Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 I walk these streets Not one soul sees me I am cying out loud Hoping someone will notice I scream as loud as i can No one hears me No one sees me What is wrong with me? Why cant you hear me? My Mothers cying My Brother looks like he lost his soul My sister going crazy But no one sees me Why cant they see me I look around and see a cofin My body is in it I am dead Link to comment
nottoogreen Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 Hi Kita, This is a well witten real life story showing your true feelings and situation. We here see and hear you in our minds and hearts. You also help others more and more and give good advice. I am proud of you all the more! You are stronger and stronger because you can see others and feel about others! You deserve to be understood but to expect to be understood is very foolish. You deserve to be seen but to expect to be seen is very foolish. Why? Your mom is too busy and hurts too, your brother and sister hurt like you or more than you! Thus they can't understand and see themselves! All the same for many people and friends in this world. Please be the light in your families life and try to support and care especially your mom. You also could make a journal in the Journals forum and we read about your feelings and issues and help and encourage you. I am always happy to look after you. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 Its truly great poetry that comes from the heart and thats what yours does. Its expressed your true feelings not hiding anything just showing how you feel. Thanks for writing that thats the poetry i love to read! Link to comment
NKP Posted August 16, 2006 Author Share Posted August 16, 2006 Thanks you two take care, kita Link to comment
Q10 Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 *hugs* Nice poem kita! *plays pikaboo* Link to comment
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