dpressedone89 Posted July 31, 2006 Share Posted July 31, 2006 are you there? i know your there youve always been there can you hear me can you grab my hand in the dark can you hold me I can make you not afraid now the past bled out no more glowing memories bloodstained the floor but we survived im sorry it had to be so tragic its all over now and im here im here for you you cannot see me and cannot touch me" but in your heart you know im there am i good enough am i good enough for you dear? will you take me will you take my hand in the dark? will you be my only one? yes i wrote this for someone, who'm im deeply in love with and would love it if she would accept me as her guy and be my girl. i am aware this sucks but raw emotion causes the brain to skip steps. leave your oppinions if you wish, stitcheS Link to comment
NKP Posted July 31, 2006 Share Posted July 31, 2006 Its doesnt suck at all, its really good. i love it Link to comment
yeawutever Posted July 31, 2006 Share Posted July 31, 2006 I like the poem too and don't worry about that one particular rejection, it happens, but guess what?? There's many fishes in the tank and it never gets empty!!!!!!! Link to comment
dpressedone89 Posted July 31, 2006 Author Share Posted July 31, 2006 i know there are other girls, but true love knows no compromise, this is the girl i want to be with, and id rather be alone than with anyone else because i could never love another Link to comment
yeawutever Posted July 31, 2006 Share Posted July 31, 2006 True love will work out only if it was meant to. If that girl wasn't meant to, then don't waste years on it. Link to comment
BrokenWingedFaery Posted July 31, 2006 Share Posted July 31, 2006 Years spent loving someone are never wasted. Link to comment
dpressedone89 Posted July 31, 2006 Author Share Posted July 31, 2006 id extinguish the sun for this girl, true love is never a waste of time, time is an illusion, existence is one grand event happening simultaneously. i have all the time in the world Link to comment
yummy Posted July 31, 2006 Share Posted July 31, 2006 If that person is not meant for you, then it's not meant to be! For sure there's someone really for you and for sure you deserve that person.. just continue to love like you've never been hurt before! Nice poem! link removed Link to comment
Caine Posted July 31, 2006 Share Posted July 31, 2006 From what you've written, I bet there's a million girls out there that would want someone as sensitive as you, you will love again. Link to comment
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