Anamika Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 Feathers falling in the rain In my eye I see the sky All of me has turned insane Up above I lie, trying not to cry Alone within the water Alienated thoughts wondering about Seeming like it’s getting hotter Surrounded, consumed by negative doubt Held within tight grips Freedom I truly seek Soul scattered rips I refuse to accept the weak There is pain in the rain Not always, I can be sane… Link to comment
registered Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 Hi Anamika. I've felt like the person in your poem... Sometimes I wonder if it is really us that are insane...it might feel like it but I think more often than not it's the rest of the world around us that is insane. BTW, I'm also from "In A Land No One Can Understand"...small world ey...lol. Link to comment
AlwaysNeedHelp Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 Wonderful poem and nice topic.. Its also easy to understand and feel the feelings inside it.. Link to comment
AlwaysNeedHelp Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 ohh and i think i belong to the same land where no one understands Link to comment
darkblue Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 Very good, and most people could easily relate. Link to comment
ShySoul Posted January 5, 2006 Share Posted January 5, 2006 From another person in a world where no one understands, great poem I can really relate to. Interesting, for people whom no one understands, a lot of people seem to understand the feeling. Link to comment
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